There's a lot that I really like here, especially the need to have care of ME/CFS based in physician-led hospital clinics, and how pwME/CFS should be accommodated in hospitals.
Here are some parts I think need tweaking:
The NG206 Guideline recommended personal care plans involving activity management but it is very unclear what evidence base there is for this, if any, and exactly how it should be implemented. It has become clear that there are differences of view in how to respond, either by using a modification of the graded exercise approach often called pacing up or by simply emphasising the need to recognise limitations on activity levels that can be tolerated without worsening of symptoms.
The term "activity management" doesn't appear in the NG206 guideline. In the previous guideline, activity management is very clearly defined as involving increases in activity. What is recommended in the NG206 guideline is "energy management". And then a kind of "if the patient wants it you can therap them". I would avoid giving the "pacing up" term more credibility by using it. And it may be best to avoid "graded exercise" even when talking about "a modification of the GE approach" because all you'll get is defensive stuff about "It's not exercise, it's activity", "It's not graded exercise, it's personalised" etc.
I suggest not using any of the terms except energy management, and instead spelling out what you mean in simple unambiguous terms, so something like:
"The NG206 Guideline recommended personal care plans involving
activity energy management but it is very unclear what evidence base there is for this, if any, and exactly how it should be implemented. It has become clear that there are differences of view in how to
respond proceed once basic energy management is in place. either by using a modification of the graded exercise approach often called pacing up or by simply emphasising the need to recognise limitations on activity levels that can be tolerated without worsening of symptoms. One option is to simply emphasise the need to adapt activity levels to fluctuating symptoms and functioning, while not limiting activity more than is necessary. Another option is to target increases in activity in a less regimented and more flexible way than previous approaches. The latter option would require assuming that the harms reported by patients were due to how therapy was implemented rather than the content of the therapy - arguably not a safe assumption.
ME/CFS follows an extended course over many months and most often years.
I have to admit, this formulation is one of my most-hated sentences in texts on ME/CFS. It implies that ME/CFS is a temporary illness, lasting, at most, a few years, when the evidence suggests it is long-term for most adults. For kids, even those who mostly recover have it for a
mean 5 years. "Many months" and "most often years" just doesn't cut it. I vote strongly that this sentence is replaced.
People with ME/CFS are not expected to show improvement in response to care provision in the short term. There are therefore no ‘goals of therapy’ to be set and no relevant assessments of ‘treatment success’ such as patient reported outcome measures.
I don't think the second sentence follows from the first. Plenty of people with other conditions don't show much or any improvement in the short term, but do in the medium or long term. Therapists set goals for all the terms. The argument to be made against goals, in my view, is that pwME/CFS should not generally be targeting increases in activity (with the exception of those who are improving), so if goals are based around that, they're inappropriate. If the goal of therapy is to find a position the person can be NG-fed in that does not worsen symptoms and does not cause them to aspirate, that's fine. It's true that outcome measures will not ascertain "treatment success", but not because of a lack of short-term improvement. The reason outcome measures will not ascertain whether treatment is successful or not is because the illness fluctuates for most, relapses and remits for a small minority plus regression to the mean and a non-specific care effect. There is an upward drift over time in most cohorts studied.
I think you have an important point to make, but it's not being made in this paragraph at present. I think your point is the final sentence:
The primary index of a successful service is the degree to which people with ME/CFS feel adequately supported and validated.
I would just supplement that with cautioning against interpreting changes that happen during care as being due to care, and explaining
why the evidence does not support therapies targeting increases in activity. Maybe quote your expert testimony!
Here's what you wrote:
Trials of therapist-delivered treatments to date have not met basic requirements for minimising bias and are therefore unsuitable as an evidence base for treatment recommendations. Inasmuch as they are interpretable, they suggest that although attitudes to health status may be influenced this does not lead to significant improvement in objectively measures of disability.
Neurology seems most relevant but rheumatology has accommodated a number of conditions the do not easily fall into a specialty category, such as chronic pain and muscle disease, especially where there may be immunological features.
but neurologists wedded to an unevidenced explanation of ME/CFS as psychogenic/"functional" should be avoided.
and rheumatologists who think ME/CFS is just mislabelled fibromyalgia, and fibromyalgia is best treated with exercise +/-psychotherapy, which may be most of them, are equally, if not more, dangerous. But we do have to be as least fostered by someone.
I'm wondering if it is worth noting that judgements of aetiology also need to be evidence based and that there is no evidence that ME/CFS is a psychosomatic disease. And also that attributions of symptoms to a psychosomatic cause and labels of functional disease cause harm and are not justified given the lack of useful treatments arising from that paradigm.
I would skip the first two and just emphasize that exercise and CBT don't work. I don't know how you would get evidence for something being psychosomatic. It just doesn't seem a strong argument to me. Whereas if you focus on the treatments not working, that argument works regardless of the aetiology the reader favours.