Excellent to make Red Whale think about what they are doing.
I think the attacking of the Dutch study could be stronger although I understand there's a limit on how long letters can be.
This is the main paragraph in the letter addressing the results:
Moreover, it is inaccurate to call the results from the Dutch study “impressive.” The “recovery” data were based on a post-hoc definition of “recovery.” That is, the Dutch investigators made up the definition after they had seen their results. It was likely not a challenging task to construct a definition that yielded the desired rate of “recovery”—which is why post-hoc findings are accorded relatively little weight as scientific evidence.
Changing the definition of recovery isn't good of course, but a reader of this is likely to think, well, no matter where the recovery level was set, there must have been some improvement.
I think I'd want to draw some attention to:
1. the length of the study was only 6 months
(My son saw a psychologist who encouraged him to go back to school. He rested over the summer, enthusiastically went to school and then had a great first couple of months. But just after 6 months after finishing the sessions with the psychologist, he fell in a heap and slept for 20 hours a day for a month. It can take time for the effects of over-exertion to accumulate.)
2. the measures were self-reported (even the school attendance - and there's that recent paper that found that self-reported school attendance is not reliable). Objective actometer measurements were made but not published.
3. The selection criteria were lax - maybe many of the participants didn't even have CFS.
4. I think there was no real control treatment. I expect the recovery rate of a group of young people suffering from vaguely defined fatigue is pretty good over 6 months.
I've only read abstracts on this and then I forget what I've read, I may have things wrong. There was the paper by
Gatinah and Vink on the Dutch Fitnet study.