i have partiqally written analyses and scrapped them because i could not finish them. or find them.
even within the mandate of "improve on existing" there are a lot of questions and a lot of possible objectives. i think we are risking working at cross purposes, and might even be at risk of doing the wrong thing.
[representativeness, visibility, making a favorble article seem worth reading, correcting disinformation, stopping perseution, showing it is a scientific topic, showing you can get it, humanness, sympathetic, etc.]
i think it is worth figuring out what we want to do, [other than the obvious like get rid of the image of the guy slumped over the desk who partied last night but it was worth it because he got into alpha omega whatever. [agreed that context can matter there but pointing out that it reinforces widespread propaganda.]]
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i am no expert but i think we can learn from the cdc here.
maybe.
the cdc [in combination with a despised charity] did two campaigns that i recall. both were harmful. one or both were done without consulting the community or even informing the community pre-facto.
AND it was supposedly to make up for malfeasance by the cdc. disobeying the us congress is serious business.
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one was "my legs are shot" in which an office worker massaged her legs. it said get help. it gave cdc address. everybody here can guess what kind of help one would have gotten. cdc info was harmful.
many office [and non-office, significantly] workers have mean bosses and uncomfortable shoes.
the other was "faces of cfs", in which they showed 100 random faces in a shopping mall. and nothign else or nothing elose useful.
they were harmful because they reinforced or introduced propaganda that those who have the disease ARE healthy or nearly so but are e.g. Bad. thus persecution. more below on Bad.
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in the case of faces of cfs, the post-facto rationalization was that random faces shows that you don't have to look sick to have the disease. on the surface, that sounds ok because it's true.
but that wasn't the prejudice most needing fighting. the persecution was not mainly related to random.
the biggest prejudice was that those who supposedly have cfs ARE healthy or nearly so. also getting away with something, making a mountain out of a molehill, being coddled, subhuman, undeserving, privileged, witch, etc.
thus the campaign post-facto deceptively rationalized that orders of magnitude bigger persecution under the pretext of fixing a smaller one that many pwme experience tangibly and proximally and frequently --- they are expected to look sick for some bogus reason and are persecuted by whoever trots out that bogus rationalization. you do not look sick (rly? then why re you lying down?) therefore i am going to harm you.
well yeah, cfs is, on such occasions, sorta expected to look sick if it is to be onsidered legitimate, UNLIKE HUNDREDS OF SERIOUS DISEASES THAT ARE NOT EXPECTED TO LOOK SICK. you just say my son has that disease and it is taken seriously.
but showing that cfs faces look random is not even going to fix THAT problem. it just says you collaborated with the cdc to make this thing where a butterfly landed on your nose into a bogus disease. except not even that. there was nothing that said that you are sick. it just showed random faces. which is a bit llike not reading the article.
FACES OF CFS CORRECTED THE NONEXISTENT MISCONCEPTION THAT PWME ALL LOOK SICK.
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the requirement that you look sick is a side effect of a bigger persecution. it is mostly a pretext for causing harm. even if you fixed it a new pretext would pop up like magic.
and there is no requirement that you look random for the disease to be taken seriously. (there's showing demographics that match the reader's demographics, but if reader thinks/will teh disease is trivial, less useful.)
(i'm not even sure if half naked supermodel is such a bad idea if gets a favorable article read. but at least make the fully clothed model wear a cannula or hold a test tube instead of smiling beatifically or slumping over desk.)
being accused of BEING healthy or nearly so is sometimes accusing the problem of being outside of science as in morality, subhuman, undeserving, trivial. and that is a misconception that needs correcting. IT IS SCIENCE.
i think [1] correcting misconceptions that lead to persecution and [2] getting readers to read an article if it is favorable are the two largest. we should consider showing children, test tubes, cannulas, feeding tubes. misrepresenting the majority isn't the issue i think.
old post
https://thekafkapandemic.blogspot.com/2012/09/the-word-invisible-is-problematic-in.html
images not looked at
https://mecentraal.wordpress.com/2021/11/24/the-reality-of-me/ .
[ETA: the reality of such things is more complex than i described when i said you are considered healthy or almost so and also Bad.]